A budding rose, my feelings for you are maturing with season,
a once beautiful friendship, is blossoming to new heights,
with the help of loves guided wings,
in flight headed for a monumental change, in our current relationship,
fast moving, from a safe zone, straight towards caution,
sacrificing guard to allow fate to take prey to loves chance,
my heart will be left alone in your silky soft hands,
to do what you will, in high hopes of our love taking reign and conquering,
I realize today, that I love everything about you,
and want nothing more than for you to be my lady now and forevermore...
Powerful and beautiful words and thoughts.
"I realize today, that I love everything about you,
and want nothing more than for you to be my lady now and forevermore..."
I like the honest tone and feel in the amazing poetry. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry and thoughts.
Coyote
"my heart will be left alone in your silky soft hands,
to do what you will, in high hopes of our love taking reign and conquering,
I realize today, that I love everything about you"
Loving, sincere and touching...You do romance justice...:)........
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Yeah I try,thanks for checking it out. If I have any questions, I would really
like to have .. read moreYeah I try,thanks for checking it out. If I have any questions, I would really
like to have a friend in you for help. B-blessed!
That transition like the pupae to butterfly is pure beauty itself JT
You have penned it from the heart here
I really liked the ending :
"I realize today, that I love everything about you,
and want nothing more than for you to be my lady now and forevermore..." - the epiphany leading to the longing is gorgeous. Very beautiful...
A beautiful poem this!
Tells you a lot about love. Its about taking a risk. And that true love often blossoms from the best of friendships!
Nicely done Jamestown!
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thanks for checking it out, you girls are so nice.
I am a firm believer in friendship being the solid foundation of the best relationships.. I, for one, will never attempt another one without it.. Friends first.. friends last.. friends forever.. that bond.. that connection.. similar tastes, opinions, the ability to just be comfortable with each other and have a good time no matter what.. what could be better?.. I love the description of blossoming, and soaring to new heights on love's wings.. very apt and beautifully done.. I enjoyed..
on a side note..
"loves guided wings"
" loves chance".............. shouldn't both of these have an apostrophe? "love's guided wings"..."love's chance"...
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thanks for checking it out, I agree and yes editing needed thx again.
9 Years Ago
you're welcome, it was my pleasure, glad I could help :)
Friendship to love is surely the path to a successful relationship.
Very sweet and full of love and respect for your special someone.
Enjoyed this very much, well done.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thanks for checking it out, I appreciate it, I needed ladies point of view.
9 Years Ago
I think she will love it very much. It's tender, honest and from the heart.
But most of all s.. read moreI think she will love it very much. It's tender, honest and from the heart.
But most of all she will love that YOU wrote it for HER. :)
Ya done good.