Blossoming Love...

Blossoming Love...

A Poem by Jamestown
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Friendship to Love...

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A budding rose, my feelings for you are maturing with season,
a once beautiful friendship, is blossoming to new heights,
with the help of loves guided wings,

in flight headed for a monumental change, in our current relationship,
fast moving, from a safe zone, straight towards caution,
sacrificing guard to allow fate to take prey to loves chance,
my heart will be left alone in your silky soft hands,
to do what you will, in high hopes of our love taking reign and conquering,

I realize today, that I love everything about you,
and want nothing more than for you to be my lady now and forevermore...

© 2015 Jamestown


Author's Note

Jamestown
All glory and honor belongs to Christ Jesus!

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Powerful and beautiful words and thoughts.
"I realize today, that I love everything about you,
and want nothing more than for you to be my lady now and forevermore..."
I like the honest tone and feel in the amazing poetry. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago




There is no fault in a blossoming heart
When love is there to bloom
But neglect of its true beauty
And to death, you've sealed its doom

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

So true, thanks for checking it out.
Oh My God! How beautiful...🌹
wish you both all the best..

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out, I appreciate it and God only knows, PTL!
"my heart will be left alone in your silky soft hands,
to do what you will, in high hopes of our love taking reign and conquering,

I realize today, that I love everything about you"

Loving, sincere and touching...You do romance justice...:)........

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Yeah I try,thanks for checking it out. If I have any questions, I would really
like to have .. read more
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)...
That transition like the pupae to butterfly is pure beauty itself JT
You have penned it from the heart here

I really liked the ending :
"I realize today, that I love everything about you,
and want nothing more than for you to be my lady now and forevermore..." - the epiphany leading to the longing is gorgeous. Very beautiful...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks a ton my friend, I really appreciate it
Beautiful poem straight from your heart ...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out.
A beautiful poem this!
Tells you a lot about love. Its about taking a risk. And that true love often blossoms from the best of friendships!
Nicely done Jamestown!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out, you girls are so nice.
Ishita Dixit

9 Years Ago

You're welcome!
I am a firm believer in friendship being the solid foundation of the best relationships.. I, for one, will never attempt another one without it.. Friends first.. friends last.. friends forever.. that bond.. that connection.. similar tastes, opinions, the ability to just be comfortable with each other and have a good time no matter what.. what could be better?.. I love the description of blossoming, and soaring to new heights on love's wings.. very apt and beautifully done.. I enjoyed..

on a side note..
"loves guided wings"
" loves chance".............. shouldn't both of these have an apostrophe? "love's guided wings"..."love's chance"...


Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out, I agree and yes editing needed thx again.
AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

you're welcome, it was my pleasure, glad I could help :)
Friendship to love is surely the path to a successful relationship.
Very sweet and full of love and respect for your special someone.
Enjoyed this very much, well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out, I appreciate it, I needed ladies point of view.
Matching Socks

9 Years Ago

I think she will love it very much. It's tender, honest and from the heart.
But most of all s.. read more
It's a really good poem, it all stars with a frienship and then grows to something more beautiful.
Great poem! I love the emotion of it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out, thanks appreciate it
Lizardo

9 Years Ago

you're welcome!

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Added on January 31, 2015
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Jamestown
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Denver, CO



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