Do this and Do that...

Do this and Do that...

A Poem by Jamestown
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People are always giving opinion...

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People and their opinions,
People and their advice,
if you really think about it, much isn't nice,

They will tell you, where to eat, where to sleep, and sometimes
who you should meet,

People, will tell you just about anything,
they'll tell you to do this, or do that,
sometimes it makes for a good laugh, and other time's
it's just downright sad,

I say this, they don't live your life, so why so much darn advice,
have they walked a day in your shoes, to know what you're up to,

Probably not, so if there's something you have been wanting to do, do it,
don't wait till tomorrow, you don't want any regrets or sorrow,

Until these people are paying you're bills, It shouldn't matter where you're
spinning your wheels,
Try enjoying life while it last, it's here for now and then it's past...

© 2015 Jamestown


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Jamestown
Quick write about people always trying to think for you...

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dan
Jamestown, Often people who can't figure out how to solve their own problems think that trying to change others will be a good substitute. Of course that's not true but it's a bizarre course of human nature for some. You can dislike everything that they say, but at the same time defend, to the death, their right to say them. Then let it go. I know, easier said than done. And I just now realized that I told you what to do right THERE. I should practice what I preach. 8^) take care...dan

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out, b-blessed.
Something we all can relate to in some way. My input for this is to say it's a well written, told very nicely to say the least . So take that as you will kindly from someone who enjoyed this piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out.
BlackRose

9 Years Ago

You're welcome.
So in the spirit of this poem I am going to tell you what I think of this poem and hope you heed my advice, I thought it was straight forward and nice with hints of truth sprinkled on the pie of life.

Posted 9 Years Ago


we are who we are so why can we not just think for ourselves?? Nicely done



Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out. B-blessed
and one of the worst things people do is say "you need to do this" or "you should do such and such"

always my first thought is "i don't need to do a damn thing except live my life as i see fit"

like the truth in this one, much.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

I totally agree, but I must admit I too am guilty. I have to remember that people are just trying to.. read more
jacob erin-cilberto

9 Years Ago

yes, usually good intent.
I think sometimes people just need to feel important or valued so the advice giving is more about satisfying their own need. Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

I agree! Thanks for checking it out.
Matching Socks

9 Years Ago

You're welcome!
I love the part in quotations. Great message, love the advice. I don't know why my reviews are cut short.... anyhoot, wonderful poem... Xo

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks, I appreciate it, b-blessed.
"Until these people are paying you're bills, It shouldn't matter where you're
spinning your wheels,
Try enjoying life while it last, it's here for now and then it's past..."

Posted 9 Years Ago


For a guy who often resents it, Jamestown--good advice!
Enjoyed your quite understandable, somewhat justified, poetic rant.
When I was your age, I, too, was tired of people "telling me what to do."
Now, young man, I wish anyone would give a damn what happens to me.
Keep writing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks, and I know what you mean.
this reminded me of song lyrics.. but maybe it is just your natural rhythm.. it flows well.. seems we are very good at directing others.. but I find it takes a lot of energy just to keep my own path clear.. I wonder at those who seem to have time to direct traffic..

Posted 9 Years Ago



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