Threw It Away...

Past relationship...

We had everything most people want,
house, kids, cars, money, and more, but I had no idea
what you had in store,

You threw it away,
Believing that you deserved more, you followed what you felt suit,
and shocked your family, leaving me stuck scrambling,

This selfish act, will forevermore change our children's lives,
I will always remember those heart felt cries,

The last thing they expected, was us being apart,
I often wonder, if you even thought about they're heart's,

With so many kids being raised in broken homes,
I thought you wanted a family to stay strong, when life threw stones,
No, you threw it away,

I'm not trying to make you feel attacked,
I just thought, we were on the same track,

While our relationship lasted, it was a trill,
I just don't understand, and I probably never will,

I do forgive you, and will never throw my love for you away,
it's here to stay, I know, I'll find my way,

But, I want you to know if you or the kids need anything at all,
I will always love you, just give me a call...

Reviews

[Tiana]

Wow James ... this says a lot about your character ... How forgiving you are and how much family value matters to you and the love for your family is first and foremost ... Wonderfully written, James ... Be well my friend ...

[Jamestown]

My God says, to forgive others if we want to also be forgiven, even if it's 777 times over.
Thanks for checking it out. All glory and honor belongs to God!

[Tiana]

Amen! I am in total agreement ... And you are so very welcome ...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i went through three divorces, luckily no kids to suffer the brunt...that has to be so hard.
well said, my friend.

[Troy Henson]

This really does resonate with me. Every word in every line.

Some people are never happy with what they have in front of them.

[olla]

this touched me.. I never learned to un-love..

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, it touched me to and not in a good way.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow, you really laid it out there in plain and simple terms… some people are just self, always looking for greener pastures.

[Jamestown]

Sad but true, Thanks for checking it out.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are most welcome.

[Maryem]

It's amazing !! and so real ! the words are amazing and so emotional !

[Jamestown]

Thanks, for checking it out, I appreciate it.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Wow very very deep, and full of emotion. This is touching and full of heart.
Once again your rhyming is brilliant, and the whole story line is very meaningful and great.
I love your writing.
Keep writing, you are talented :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks, for your kind review.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your welcome :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks, for checking it out, i appreciate it.

[Lavender Soya]

I must admit, I almost cried. Those were honest and soulful words. Kudos!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, I appreciate it.

[Vishuddha]

I enjoyed the way you slipped from now rhyme at all into close rhymes and then complete rhyme. The substance - rock hard. Well done!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind words.