In the mirror...

In the mirror...

A Poem by Jamestown
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What my eyes see...

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I'm looking at, an unbelievable human being,
someone, who's so unique and bold,
someone, who has a heart made of gold,

A person, that I truly admire,
someone all the girls desire,

A soul that's unmatched,
a personality, that makes people get attached,

A person, people try to imitate,
a smile, everyone anticipates,

Someone, who sets a high standard,
a person, who's well mannered,

He's a great friend,
someone, I will always defend,

He's a great brother, and a wonderful, son to his mother,
In my book, he's number one,
standing next to me is my son,

Today, Cole is 13yrs old, my pride and joy,
the apple of my eye, and there's nobody alive,
that can break our tie...

Happy birthday son, I love you!!!


© 2015 Jamestown


Author's Note

Jamestown
Written for my son,
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!
All glory and honor belongs to God!

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a wonderful gesture, ode to your son...very endearing...
pleasing rhyme as well thanks for sharing :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jamestown

10 Years Ago

Thanks, means so much, I so marvel at your skills.
ms. barrie

10 Years Ago

you're very welcomed...oh my word, thank you so much...that means a lot :)
happy writings to y.. read more
No greater inspiration than our children. Some of my best also inspired by my kids.
Enjoyed this, very special. You should start a collection for each child. When they are older they may appreciate reading them.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jamestown

10 Years Ago

Good advice, thx for reading, I appreciate it!
Matching Socks

10 Years Ago

You're welcome.
Thank you for reading, I will take your advice and continue to document these moments,.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jamestown

10 Years Ago

Thanks, and I couldn't agree more.
What a touching poem to dedicate to a son!
Wonderful how you share with him and let other people know your thoughts, too.
Hope he cherishes it.
Keep writing those moments down for him.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jamestown

10 Years Ago

I will take your advice for sure, thx for reading.
Josie E. Cook M. A.

10 Years Ago

You are welcome! :) Children to be cherished.

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Added on January 25, 2015
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Jamestown
Jamestown

Denver, CO



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