DANGER-Do Not Enter...

Danger-Do Not Enter...

This is an official coward alert!
There's men among us, making cowardly decisions,
these cowards, think it's o.k. to hit women.

So, please be on "Alert"-
These men have no, integrity or honor, they're simply
out, stalking someone's daughter.

These cowards are professional cons!
These men will, lie, cheat, and steal, again, and again,
they're master's of deception, they know how to pretend.

These cowards will do what it takes, to earn your trust,
then steal your heart and leave you in the dust.

I've witnessed this, several times with some friends,
when the lying starts, that's when it begins.

These cowards, will hurt you till you're blue in the face, so
find a good guy, to take this chumps place.

I can't stand a jerk like this, just talking about it, makes me pissed.
There are still good men out there, waiting for you, with arms wide open, so
PLEASE, get ride of the trash, before you're broken...

Author's Note

Wrote this after watching the news, and seen another coward athlete in
trouble for domestic abuse. It makes me sick!
All glory and honor, belongs to God!

Reviews

[Valentine]

Yes, they are out there always apologizing after ward, promising to never do it again etc. I worked at an abuse center, most will never change.. Valentine

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Miss Sharon]

This kind of person also gets me very upset with what I call "righteous indignation" because it sounds better that some other things I could say. ANY man that would hit a woman is not a man at all in my way of believing. You've written it well my friend! ~Sharon

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, yes I agree completely with your review! B-blessed:)

[...Relic...]

A good message all woman should hear.

Good poem and important.

[Jamestown]

Thanks a lot,I appreciate your review, hey have done new material lately?
curious, would love to check it out, b-blessed!

[...Relic...]

Just one I jotted down tonight. You're welcome J.

[Haley]

Great to stand up to this and let women know they are not stuck in these situations. Would like to point out though that anyone can be in an abusive situation, child or adult, male or female or otherwise.

[Jamestown]

I agree, thanks for checking it out!

[wordman]

so take out the trash before it takes you out

[Jamestown]

You got it, thanks for reading, God bless you Wordman!

[Debra]

I lived through it for over 3 years.
This was very well written.
Thank you, for being a man of valor.

[Jamestown]

I am so sorry to hear that, nobody deserves to be abused. I don't get upset often, but
this would do it, thanks for checking it out, I appreciate it.

[Debra]

You are welcome.
A lot about a persons character comes through their writing.
Your writing shows what a huge heart you have.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

As a child of a Mother that has this kind of domestic violence against her, with her first marriage (not my dad) I feel the anger that one let's bubble - a most telling piece, well done.

[Jamestown]

Thanks, friend I will be looking forward to more form you, God bless you!

[willweb]

This type of behavior makes me sick...woman should be cherished, not used as a punching bag. And the abuse can ahppened anywhere and it's nots always physical...many women are verbally beat up right here on this site. Very loud and wonderful message.

[Jamestown]

I agree fully, thanks for reading and review!

[Cindy Marietta]

Thank you for standing up for something so important. Whether it be husbands or boyfriends or fathers, it is very real, and people like you make a great difference.

[Rene Salinas]

I'm not sure if the humour that I sensed is even intended but when i read how you had watched the news and decided to write something as a consequence what hit me there is that need to counterbalance something that is so clearly unbalanced. It doesn't mater how much I shake my head while watching the news, how many times I ask uestions back to the TV or hold my arms up in the air as a sign of desperation. There is indeed something very oppresive about sitting down and just receiving something so unbalanced. That is so vivid coming through your words which is not quite a narrative but all the same I could follow the sequence of emotions perfectly well. The other aspet which I find worth poitning is the aspect of judgement. Indeed I think I sit down there to judge every single one of the news bit so much so that lately I'm avoiding that time of the day. Of course who am I ? To be judging anyone.... .

Still though it doesn't make it any less intense.

Thank you.