Together

Opposites attract...

If I'm up and you're down, together would make us, in between,
If I'm blue and you're yellow, together would make us the color green,

If I was the peanut butter, and you're the jelly, together we'd be a delicious snack,
are you following what I'm saying, are we on the same track,
If I'm the water, and you're the ice, together we'd be a refreshing drink,
now you can't argue with that, don't you think,

If I'm the milk, and you're the cookies, together we'd be, a delicious desert,
are you paying attention, are you staying alert,

Most the things I mentioned, are opposites, but they seem to attract,
so, who are we to disagree with that fact,

I believe that, you and I were predestined from the beginning of time,
and a really hope, you enjoyed, reading this rhyme...

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Author's Note

Spontaneous, fun writing, hope you laugh. PTL!

Reviews

[Debra]

I did laugh, very charming!

[Mary Bradley]

Beautiful and very witty . I quite enjoy this piece .

[Jamestown]

Thanks, for checking it out, I was being goofy and it was fun.

[Humberto Contreras]

It really nice it bright some joy to my day.

[Jamestown]

Awesome, that's why we write, if we can make just one person feel joy, then mission
complete, thanks for reading, I appreciate it.

[Lizardo]

It was a fun ride to read!
This is a sweet poem, I enjoyed reading this
Great work! :)

[Jamestown]

Thank you, I appreciate you checking it out.

[Lizardo]

You're welcome

[I Am Svetlana]

This was so charming and you put all the opposites together so well :) some may think it cliche, but you've done a fine job with this. I can see this being written on a napkin and left for a cute waitress. Haha.

[Jamestown]

Thank you, and good idea with napkin, lol

[Kelly Scheppers]

Ok, if I'm the peanut butter, it's gotta be Jif...that's all I'm saying!

What a diverse piece, a yin to the yang!

[W R Stowe]

excellent my friend and nature itself proves that opposites attract.Takes + and - to make a light shine,+and - to avoid the repelling of a magnet,man and a woman to create birth that God chooses.Spirit and water to be born of God hot and cold makes warm.Very good

[Emunah June.]

"If I'm up and you're down, together would make us, in between"

That line right there really draws you in, makes you want to know more. Reading the whole thing through made me feel really warm and happy, and it also made me laugh! It's such a fun happy thing, and I enjoyed the experience of reading it.

[Jamestown]

Thank you, funny thing is I was going to get serious about something else on my mind and this came out. Thanks again!

[MsJewel]

This is so cute and clever...cookies and milk...peanut butter and jelly...some of my favorite treats...and absolutely delicious in this sweet little gem!

:) Julie