Together

Opposites attract...

If I'm up and you're down, together would make us, in between,
If I'm blue and you're yellow, together would make us the color green,

If I was the peanut butter, and you're the jelly, together we'd be a delicious snack,
are you following what I'm saying, are we on the same track,
If I'm the water, and you're the ice, together we'd be a refreshing drink,
now you can't argue with that, don't you think,

If I'm the milk, and you're the cookies, together we'd be, a delicious desert,
are you paying attention, are you staying alert,

Most the things I mentioned, are opposites, but they seem to attract,
so, who are we to disagree with that fact,

I believe that, you and I were predestined from the beginning of time,
and a really hope, you enjoyed, reading this rhyme...

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Author's Note

Spontaneous, fun writing, hope you laugh. PTL!

Reviews

[Chris]

came across as a fun write.

[Jamestown]

That's what I was going for:)
Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Ana B.]

I really did enjoy reading this rhyme, a most wonderful and splendid write James, very sweet :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Ana B.]

You too my friend :)

[Deepika]

Aww..I really enjoyed it! :) a clever blend of contrasting dispositions to make up a lovely write :) to flavour it were the engaging questions in between.good one James :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out! I always appreciate your review, b-blessed

[Precious]

This is so true opposites always attract

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Precious]

it was my pleasure

[Valentine]

Smiling more than laughing. A lot of truth in this one. People can be a lot different but still be happy together. Valentine

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Alisa Js]

Aloha,

What a creative and entertaining couplets... very nicely written.

Lots of positive energy filled with hope.

I enjoyed it.

Alisa ;-)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

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I dig it, Jams. This was fun to read and sweet :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, b-blessed!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Wow! Great rhyme, James. You're amazing.
Opposites attract, that's true. But you know, there might be only few differences and you were just amazed of how you still get together.

Keep having fun in writing!

[Jamestown]

Always having fun! Thanks for checking it out.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

You're welcome.

[Cryingkate]

Ha Afraa, is correct this was out of the box and fun.
You got me smiling again :-)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, glad yur smiling:) b-blessed!

[Afraa]

You thought outside the box on this one, James! The most entertaining piece I have read in a while. Never read another poem such as this one. It subconsciously put a smile on my face.

Rhyming scheme is on point!

How do you do it?

Thank you for sharing!

[Jamestown]

Thanks, I really appreciate it, hey check out dream land I just posted and let me
know what you think, thanks again, b-blessed!

[Afraa]

You're very welcome.

And of course I will.