Chasing tunnels
A Book by James Hamilton
Uploading my very very rough draft of Hannah's story. Feed back would be good but do remember they are going to be far from perfect anyway since this is literally just the first idea draft.
© 2015 James Hamilton
Author's Note
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Ignore spellings and grammar,let me know what you think of the plot. And the dialogue although dialogue will probably be edited in later drafts.
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Author
James Hamiltonnot going to say, not going to say, United Kingdom
About
22 years old, hoping to change the way people veiw the world. Not sure how good I am. I have no qualification and I'm not looking for a proverbial beat down so please be nice constructive criticism we.. more..
Writing
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