Haiku 5

A Poem by James McFadyen

Sentries of bluebells

cresting the mantle of snow

blemish skin so pure.

© 2015 James McFadyen

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gram linski

A perfect 10, a great haiku, loved your dad's review, he sounds like an a*****e much like my own, lol

Posted 5 Years Ago

John Alexander McFadyen

Son, I have to be honest with you for once... we tried to have you aborted. That is why you're so retarded and handicapped now... it was the failed abortion.

Every night your hooker dog of a mother and I cry over your survival. You actually owe us money for ruining a perfectly good abortion.

Posted 7 Years Ago

0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Oh Christ, It explains so much!
Thank you. Thank you. Nothing is more beautiful than honesty.. read more

AYVID N

Beautiful and very beautiful!

Posted 8 Years Ago

0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

John Alexander McFadyen

A way with the descriptive word formed into verse is indeed your forte. Another descriptive, crisp and colourful portrait.

Posted 9 Years Ago

0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on November 26, 2015
Last Updated on November 26, 2015

Author

James McFadyen

London, Middlesex, United Kingdom

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Graduate from the University of Exeter: BA HONS English Literature with Creative Writing (Study Abroad) Former English Language Teacher in Hanoi, Vietnam. more..