Haiku 5

Sentries of bluebells

cresting the mantle of snow

blemish skin so pure. 

Reviews

[gram linski]

A perfect 10, a great haiku, loved your dad's review, he sounds like an a*****e much like my own, lol

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Son, I have to be honest with you for once... we tried to have you aborted. That is why you're so retarded and handicapped now... it was the failed abortion.

Every night your hooker dog of a mother and I cry over your survival. You actually owe us money for ruining a perfectly good abortion.

[James McFadyen]

Oh Christ, It explains so much!
Thank you. Thank you. Nothing is more beautiful than honesty.

Ps. Exactly how much do I owe you? Do you prefer cash, cheque, or electronic banking?

[AYVID N]

Beautiful and very beautiful!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A way with the descriptive word formed into verse is indeed your forte. Another descriptive, crisp and colourful portrait.