Bottom shelf whiskey feels good on a cut and the Bible's not healing the the pain A bar stool's spinning, keeping her feet off the ground every man feels the same.
Cigarette smoke cast a haze on the room neon lights the way The bourbon on his breath hides the shame on his face Every girl looks the same.
She's got nothing to lose He's got nothing to gain - They're both at the table playing the same old game but a full house never beats a straight.
Card key opens up the door to her room He reaches and pulls the shade Drinking Champaign from a plastic cup Every night goes the same.
She's got nothing to lose He's got nothing to gain - They're both at the table playing the same old game but a full house never beats a straight.
Two A.M. and the rain's pour'n down Steams rises up from the ground She's lying on bed with a tear in her eye Another hand lost this round.
She's got nothing to lose He's got nothing to gain - They're both at the table playing the same old game but a full house never beats a straight.
I liked this poem. I wrote my Texas poetry when I was station at Fort Hood, Texas. I loved the highway 35 and the Texas free spirit.
"She's got nothing to lose
He's got nothing to gain -
They're both at the table playing the same old game
but a full house never beats a straight."
I knew the above lines once. Good for the writer, not good for the soul. Thank you James for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
Posted 4 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
4 Years Ago
I was at Ft. Bliss for AIT, then Bragg, but never made it to Hood
4 Years Ago
Fort Hood was cool. Downtown Austin, one hour away taking the back road. I did my final years at For.. read moreFort Hood was cool. Downtown Austin, one hour away taking the back road. I did my final years at Fort Steward.
wow, the despair in this poem is unabating..
two lives juxtaposed, meet in her room....neither comes out for the better.
it's a vicious cycle...but they both keep going back to the table.
well done, i say...you are playing with a poetic deck.
j.
I liked this poem. I wrote my Texas poetry when I was station at Fort Hood, Texas. I loved the highway 35 and the Texas free spirit.
"She's got nothing to lose
He's got nothing to gain -
They're both at the table playing the same old game
but a full house never beats a straight."
I knew the above lines once. Good for the writer, not good for the soul. Thank you James for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
Posted 4 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
4 Years Ago
I was at Ft. Bliss for AIT, then Bragg, but never made it to Hood
4 Years Ago
Fort Hood was cool. Downtown Austin, one hour away taking the back road. I did my final years at For.. read moreFort Hood was cool. Downtown Austin, one hour away taking the back road. I did my final years at Fort Steward.