They sat together at a table for two. Their first time alone no need for a menu. He stared into her eyes a deep hazel-brown until her face began to blush and her eyes moved down. Then she looked up for the first time she knew as she stared into his eyes of deep ocean blue, That this was the man, she was meant to spend this night in his arms and her soul would mend. They held an embrace and in his arms, she fit then they sat side-by-side sharing a bowl of grits.
This is fun & flirty & I like the way it seems to build up to an anti-climax crescendo. As we read along, we're waiting for this amazing revelation as to why this shared meal has captured this narrator's heart with such a swoop of intensity . . . and then we find out it's grits. Whatever floats your boat, my friend! *tee! hee!* I'm in the mood for something playful & silly like this, after all the intensity we're going thru on the political front (((HUGS)))
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
You never thought of grits as romantic? What? I was just goofing off and thought that I was getting.. read moreYou never thought of grits as romantic? What? I was just goofing off and thought that I was getting a bit too serious with the love poems. Glad you enjoyed it.
'perfect Date'
James,
Well, I was wondering how this one would end.....hmmm. I guess with the detail that was provided we readers will imagine out own outcomes and scenarios. I enjoyed the descriptions given and the cute and fun too.
Kathy
Great ending. It was mushy and sweet, and then there's the surprise ending of grits. If I keep reading your poems, I'm eventually going to have to try those darn things just so I know what you're talking about.
This is fun & flirty & I like the way it seems to build up to an anti-climax crescendo. As we read along, we're waiting for this amazing revelation as to why this shared meal has captured this narrator's heart with such a swoop of intensity . . . and then we find out it's grits. Whatever floats your boat, my friend! *tee! hee!* I'm in the mood for something playful & silly like this, after all the intensity we're going thru on the political front (((HUGS)))
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
You never thought of grits as romantic? What? I was just goofing off and thought that I was getting.. read moreYou never thought of grits as romantic? What? I was just goofing off and thought that I was getting a bit too serious with the love poems. Glad you enjoyed it.