Soon to Fall

A coming sunset soon to fall
     And darkness washes the pain,
Not all.

Reviews

[Shabeeh Haider]

You are so right. Some of the pain always stays. No amount of time and darkness can make it disappear.
Very powerful lines.

[James]

Never completely leaves us, but then, I don't think it would have ever been worth the effort if it did.

[Shabeeh Haider]

I agree. You are so right

[Jacob Clifford]

Such an impactful few words.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, darkness merely covers it up...in the morning...the sun rises, but doesn't shine well for all, for some it just uncovers the pain once again...

[Kelly Scheppers]

Sometimes the simplicity the brevity of words offers, is simply the most dramatic and beautiful. It was very easy to get wrapped up in this, James...good piece!

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of words. You said enough to create the closing of the day and hidden sadness. Thank you James for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote