Hemingway Can't Keep My Attention

Hemingway Can't Keep My Attention

A Poem by James

I'm sitting, trying to hold a steady thought;
a difficult task today -- and why should today be special?
If Hemingway can't keep my attention,
great as he is,
then nothing can.
So I'll put him aside, right next to Melville,
who I set down years ago. 
I'll just sit and let my mind wander off.
Maybe I can focus on more important things 
like when did my shirt get so tight?

© 2016 James


Author's Note

James
And I'm such a Hemingway fan.

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At least you don't have to sew buttons on a book!? Like the fun and ingenuity of this poem, has the taste of a slim book with other such observations! Have you considered that? Fun moments spent and hopefully more to come. .

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

James

8 Years Ago

I haven't considered that, thank you so much it's always good to see you here.
emmajoy

8 Years Ago

You really should, if you don't mine me saying so.
this is too funny....not easy to put Hemingway aside...but Melville? i put him aside after a couple pages---

and then bought a bigger shirt.

j.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

James

8 Years Ago

Glad it gave you a laugh. I read "Moby Dick" but it took me a year and I skipped a lot of pages. .. read more

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Added on August 12, 2016
Last Updated on August 15, 2016
Tags: Focus, Hemingway, life

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The Beach, NC



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