'I See You'

'I See You'

A Poem by James

I see you, see me.
Surrounded by my people
Totally alone.

© 2016 James


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"I See You"
James,
Within familiar social settings of family, friends, acquaintances is where we need to remember why this love room is important. We mustn't take this place of belonging for granted. Our hearts are important. Reaching out, smiling, caring is important. But we can take it for granted and not act as is necessary. Your poem above is a good reminder this time of year, Thanksgiving and Christmas as we gather. Good job!
Kathy

Posted 6 Years Ago


The complete aloness is described here in a perfect way. Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

James

8 Years Ago

Thanks for reading and for your review.
Funny how we can feel completely alone around peopl.. read more

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Added on March 21, 2016
Last Updated on March 21, 2016
Tags: Short, Solitude, Loneliness

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The Beach, NC



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