Im In Love With A Hipster.

Awkward poem about my love of this hipster girl. Just went with it. Never edit my poems. ever.

We are complete opposite in this world. 

How we met is a wonder to me. 

When we get along I am just as confused.

Our awkwardness makes me fall even more.

Your style may be what got me.

Or was it your personality,

That I am still trying to figure out.

Such a unique figure.

Truly you make me nervous, I promise. 

This is a movie scene that is drawn out.

With an ending unknown yet.

Everyone hopes it ends good. 

The music is different, but the same.

Clothes that would never match together.

I'm not sure who I am yet.

But, I have fallen in love with a hipster.

Reviews

[wordman]

this is what makes the world go round and being nervous is a good sighn
welcome aboard

[h d e rushin]

I also don't edit, which has something to do with rebellion (anarco-syndicalism) that theory of
poetic suntax based on functional rather than territorial representation....lol.

Interesting approach. You're talking to us the reader, all while talking to her the hipster. You
"just went with it" which means to me that you are speaking from the heart. And not the poetic
heart which is a totally different thing entirely. Love deals with the informal properties of
language and this was very nicely written..You might have to explain what a hipster is to me though..

dana

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Hahaha in love with a hipster i love it.
Very good little story/poem.
Very romantic... I like how you talk about differences and everything that made you/or made up guy... fall in love with this girl, you take every reader down that road to falling in love with you...
I enjoyed reading this :)
Great piece :)

[tyson]

haha, awesome title, dude. It makes for a good laugh and a good read. nice job!

[James Huston]

hahaha thanks man

[Raymond Federle]

Got a giggle off of this. Fun and entertaining but with that sense of a caring emotion. Nice :)