Nothing Is Alike.

pick what you want it to be about.

I looked deep down into me. 

Took everything i had to find it.

Felt the world tremble below me.

If it was not for my anguish. 

We could not see eye to eye.

Perfection would have to wait.

Timing took its place.

A pearl then formed of nothing.

Making something incredible.

The find matched nothing.

Awkwardly in space. 

The most beautiful prize.

Happy becomes such a trait.

Because stillness is warm.

So drawn into with feels. 

Its relief that catches.

Steady beat back and forth.

Nothing is alike. 

Reviews

[bobc]

J...like this but the punctuation...the full stop after each line...gives it a jerky feel. I know you were clear that punctuation is important to your writing...as it is for all of us...but I felt the lines deserved better flow. Thought you might re-consider for this piece. Like the ideas expressed...bobc

[RealistMe]

I agree with bobc. James, if you spent more time on this poem's grammar and punctuation, it could be better. It has the potential.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

James although this is a somewhat random piece you again create a very deep feel in your writing which provokes emotion and thought.

[Laminators Dubai]

That's is brilliant and the title is just perfect!

[James Huston]

thanks, it came out very abstract, good to see someone got it.

[Laminators Dubai]

That's cool....keep sharing^`