Oh So Alone.

I have been alone for some time now.
Their is no one to blame but myself.
Because i asked for this eternal vow.
No matter how many times i ask for help.

God gave me my wish, yes he did.
But now a few months into this.
I have become such a broken kid.
As if my creation was a total miss.

I can not tell if im crazy or not.
For now that is what i call it.
Illness, surely what i have caught.
Something that will remain unlit.

Reviews

[Calissa Knox]

I could feel your emotion through this poem. I can tell it came from your heart. Absolutely beautiful.

[bobc]

J...careful with there/their/they're. Spell checker won't catch those. Same comment about another poem regarding the full stop at the end of each line. Breaks the flow of the piece. Thanx for posting...bobc

[tyson]

"dont edit any of my work. Once it is written down i leave it. I dont know go back and change anything.

I am terrible at spelling and punctuation. I think it makes my writing unique and different."

-James Huston

[bobc]

J...I'd urge you to re-consider this approach in toto. Poetry, and your talent, deserve nothing less.

[Kenaz]

Their>There
I don't understand the line "No matter how many times I ask for help". This seems misplaced

[Laminators Dubai]

Yeah... Sometimes we want to stay alone and its not so bad...

Simple yet impressive.
Thanks^^

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

D: you wanna be alone? That don't sound very fun, but I guess I can relate some what to this at times.

[James Huston]

no i dont :/ i just feel like i asked to be alone so much at a time in my life and now its all come true and i have to live with it. i still have friends but not like before haha. but its not fun D: but i live with it..

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

oh well I guess I can relate at times...but don't you wanna go and meet peoples or you just know lots of peoples and they don't spend much time with ya...being lonely isn't fun D: me wish me had more places to go and people to hang out with but meh lol

[James Huston]

i know lots of people, that have just faded out of my life. they are there..but they arent. yeah i do too..i plan to move to Australia to solve this problem :)

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

o.O how would that solve your problem? Your friends are there or you just wanna move there lol

[James Huston]

Because its so much better there. everyone is already a good friend when you get there :D

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

hmm if you say so xD but does it really matter...there are good friends and bad friends or what not where ever you go...at least that's how I see it.

[James Huston]

hahaha :) i just like to think aussy has more friendly peoples lol. im sure there is "bad" peoples there too. but who knows..maybe there isnt as many . but you are very correct, i agree..

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

plus they got cool accents xD I don't like hot weather though..so I probably wouldn't like it there lol

[James Huston]

yeah thats a plus :D i grew up in cold weather for half my life. now i love living in heat, although i miss snow. you can always go closest to Antarctica, maybe that would help? ;P

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

lmbo xD no that would not help at all...that is way to cold mister xD where I live seems to be perfect lol

[James Huston]

haha well i thought i would just suggest it :) where do you live exactly? O.o

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

lol yeah...I live in Washington ^^ so green and so purty...me like the woods lol though I don't get out there very often D:

[James Huston]

OOoo i was your state neighbor for a long time, Washington does look pretty amazing :o i do love the woods and forest though, i miss that alot D: you should! i would be out there all the time!

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

xD well why are you moving the Australia then lol and yeah D: cost gas money and you gotta have a permit nows Dx lol hope I can get up there and take more pictures sometime though ^^ would be fun

[James Huston]

i just wana do something crazy! go somewhere new! yeah its very expensive :( yeah you should do it :)

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

xD well I guess that is fine but what if you don't like it over there and you is stuck D: lol yeah but there is nice scenery around where I live that I can go and take pictures at least ^^ still purty lol

[James Huston]

i think i was going to plan for like a month long trip or something like that to go there :p that way i can kind of decide..or maybe ill just move, who knows. well see there ya go :D youv made up your mind that you have to do it soon!

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

lol ahh I see xD and yeah it's not really that easy for me to make up me mind...I just wing it lol

[James Huston]

me either, decisions scare me. lol, so again, dont feel alone. yeah i would probably have too :p

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

xD yeah...don't wanna make a wrong one..but you gotta make one sooner or later lol

[James Huston]

that is true..thats all life is about lol :p decisions, decisions. oh well..haha

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

haha indeed...though sometimes it can be fun...the process...maybe not the decision making...decision making can be stressful lol

[James Huston]

indoobididly.

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

o.o interesting word...lol