As I Miss You

As I Miss You

A Poem by HopingStrong
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Sitting in regret, missing someone I wish I still had.

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What's left of us
A tear drop here and there
Your eyes have dried
But mine are drowning

I questioned once
The fear of caring
Time to fight this final downing

Lift me up
I tell myself
Keep distracting every thought

Every dog just wants a family
Every God comes with a cost

© 2015 HopingStrong


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hey absouletelly amazing...but something missing.
you exactlly tell about people nature in this world...whathey showing is they are crying for their love,care and sake.but actually they are crying over split milk.what they exactally never gets.


Posted 9 Years Ago


HopingStrong

9 Years Ago

Indeed it is something never to be again. So the tears are wasted. Though there's always a time for .. read more
I love the sense of hope in there.

Posted 9 Years Ago


HopingStrong

9 Years Ago

Thank you for the review!
A heartfelt poem. Filled with emotion. I'm afraid regret is a part of life.
A good write baring your soul.

Posted 9 Years Ago


HopingStrong

9 Years Ago

Indeed it is, but one cannot dwell. Always gotta move on and move forward! Thanks for the review.

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Added on March 27, 2015
Last Updated on March 27, 2015
Tags: Love, Sad, Breakup, HopingStrong, Canadian, New, 2015, Poem, Poetry

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HopingStrong
HopingStrong

New Brunswick, Canada



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I'm a man that has won. A man that has lost. A loss of the one not the plan, but a cost. The cause of the damage, the hammering thoughts. I stop. And write what I'm thinking. That's all. more..

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