Burning Desire

Burning Desire

A Poem by HopingStrong
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Simple poem about desiring a woman.

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Words melt her cold heart
A burning in her eyes
If a touch could ignite mine
Hers is the desire

Books in the fire
The pages unwritten
A spoken word, spoken first
Bathe in the image

Painted with limits
No stains in the linen
A fresh start, this spark
Blazing a finish

Words melt her cold heart
Burning with desire
If a touch could ignite mine
Hers I'd require

   -HopingStrong

© 2015 HopingStrong


Author's Note

HopingStrong
Another quick poem I made at work, day dreaming about that spark...

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a fine poem full of passion and desire, the flow is great and the rhymes come out of nowhere which is great, you have much promise my friend, i'm sure there's so much more to come :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


HopingStrong

9 Years Ago

Much thanks, and indeed there will!

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 Added on March 25, 2015
Last Updated on March 25, 2015
Tags: Poem, 2015, HopingStrong, Love, Fire

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HopingStrong
HopingStrong

New Brunswick, Canada



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I'm a man that has won. A man that has lost. A loss of the one not the plan, but a cost. The cause of the damage, the hammering thoughts. I stop. And write what I'm thinking. That's all. more..

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