Going To Heaven

dying

God saw you were hurting

The pain was just to great

He lowered down his hands and laid you in place

You begged and pleaded for him to let you stay

For the ones you loved started to fade away

God said he was sorry

There was nothing he could do

For fate has set it's time upon you

He pressed his hand together for a moment of prayer

"Don't worry my son they'll all soon be there."

As he rose you above higher then you've ever seen

You looked at him and knew it was no dream.

Reviews

[Lover Of Words]

Very real emotionns...

[Delicate Grace]

This is beautifully written, captures the emotion of the moment.