The Storm

As I drive down this desolate road

An ominous feeling begins to grow

The lightning cracks and the thunder rolls

The rain begins to pour

Inside my mind

It's just like the outside

It's only me

I'm lost in the storm

My mind is being torn

My only wish is to make it stop

I will pray for that last rain drop

As it falls, I know the sun will follow soon

My mind again will be free from this monsoon

-James Barger

Author's Note

Any criticism is welcome!

Reviews

[Pamcocoa]

I quite like it. Kind of an odd comment but your writing style reminds me of mine :) keep writing

[James Barger]

Thank you very much! Not odd at all!! :)