Seek the Wind

A favorite of mine.

A sweet breeze carresses
The soft cheek of a loved one

A kiss
Light and fresh
Tender as a mothers embrace
Powerful as a fathers word
Holding all the love and meaning
Of a hopeless romantic

A kiss
Speaking louder than words ever could
Healing wounds of a torn soul
Igniting passions of a lonely heart

The breeze moves on
Leaving a longing and sense of loss
And drying a single tear
 

Reviews

[Sarah B.]

sweet poem

[Damien Dsoul]

It is sublime, yearning and soft ... almost like being caught in the centre of a gently breeze over the Atlantic.

[xlynne]

at the last paragraph are you suggesting that the person is leaving someone?
i really liked this. i liked how you said a kiss...holding all the love and meaning. that can be so true. great poem! i can see why it would be one of your favorites.

[Chelsea Schermerhorn]

Very nice concept of a kiss. I love the feeling and depth of this piece. It is very heartfelt and uplifting. Thank you for your entry into the Any and All Poetry Contest. You have again made it into the first cut of finalists.

[Tania Leigh]

Exquisitely written.......very, very nice work :-)

[OilsandSyntax]

This is very passionate and moving. Ah, if my husband could write as you do...
This is one of my favorites and I'll be adding you to my library. Beautifully written.

[My Name is Brenda and I..]

Beuatiful. I am going to add this to my favorites. A lovely start to repopulating my library. Well done! Brenda