My Fairest Beauty

Dedicated to my fiance.

My fairest beauty

Clothed in petals and silks

Laying amidst the dew laden blades

Beneath yonder willow tree

 

Her skin as pale as porcelain

With the faintest champagne blush

Her caress is warmth incarnate

Soft as a summers breeze

 

She is my gloried savior

Leading me through the tangled paths

Of my nearly broken mind

Soothing as the balm of Eros

 

Her eyes flash as diamonds

Laden with mischief

As she casts a playful smile

Uplifting my spirit with the merest glance

 

She is my fairest beauty

Clothed in petals and silks

Who lies amidst the dew laden blades

Beneath yonder willow tree.

Reviews

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

Wow mate, I love the picture you paint with this piece, very captervating and wonderous. A really great write....!!!

[George Love]

Very nicely done. Very expressive and I have to say very well worded. This has to be one of the best dedications to a loved one I have read in a while. Good job!

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Nicely worded. Beautiful poem. She's lucky! Great job!

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

Wow.... This is a great poem! your wording was amazing... the flow was great! Good job!

[SM Davis]

Her eyes flash as diamonds
Laden with mischief

Another minx in our midst??? Loved this one!

[Amor-de-angel]

Simply delightful...

[W.k.kortas]

Nicely done piece, a bit pastoral and bit courtly-love at the same time. Has a very old-world feel to it, and definitely romantic.

[desertraven]

She's speechless! You did it! Very nice piece.
Sandra♥

[Crystal]

I do not quit know how to reapond to this. It is hard when you know it is about you. It is a wonderful piece.

[Tania Leigh]

Beautiful, James...you must have her swooning :-)

[Angelheaded Hipster]

I adore this, and I know your lady is lucky...