Outrage

Acid and flames sear

my veins as my vision grows

Monochromatic

Reviews

[Rain]

Once I looked up the word Monochromatic I understood how true your rage was. Rain..

[Paula M. Potter]

Wow was this about what I think it was? very powerful though I liked it.

[Imperfection]

The feelings behind such outrage seem intense.
You've said so much with so few words.
Very powerful.

Neatly done.

[Donald Meikle]

Does it tunnel? (just askin') Title drew me in. (designed one once) nice haiku

[Tania Leigh]

eeek...I'm glad this isn't about me



( is it? )


:-p

It amazes me the wrath you can release in three lines

[Victoria Lee~]

Wow. Powerful write in just a few lines. Keep venting......