Outrage

Acid and flames sear

my veins as my vision grows

Monochromatic

Reviews

[Olivera]

awesome haiku!

[A. L. Robinson]

I love this! Nicely written!

[syn]

short but so poinent no other words were needed

[George Love]

Big punch in few words. Nicely done!

[SM Davis]

short graphic and to the point! So much said in so little. Excellent!

[The Elder Pine]

Good to see this pice in another contest. I like it very much and I wish you the best of luck.

[G. Cedillo]

great simple usages, big scope - wonderful image - haiku thought punch
thanks for this,
'/ g

[James K. Blaylock]

This is so awesome! I burnt my eye-lids reading it! Keep up the killer writes, man.

[The Elder Pine]

Very deep and angry, I really felt your rage within these lines. Well expressed.

[Bluet_Belle]

sssssssssssssssssssssssss My heart hisses. I feel angry. I love it.