Lost

An earlier piece.

Lost
I am lost
Lost in the sound of your voice
The melodies of love and longing
And I seek no exit

I am lost
Lost in the gems of your eyes
Treading pathways of light
Reflected with sensitivity and compassion
And I am content to stay

I am lost
Lost in the carress of your lips
Tender desire surrounded by quiet passion
At a loss for words I continue
And I enjoy the stay

I am lost
But I pray I never find my way
 

Reviews

[*~Poetic_Essence~*]

I really like your style..i feel your emotions, there is nothing wrong with being lost in love..and I feel you never wanna find your way back. I enjoyed this one as well..i hoep to read more of your work...
Well From One Word-Play Poet To The Next...Always Remember To Write With Your Heart!

s~Shanty~s

[Blackbirdsong]

The ending felt a bit abrupt to me...your way where? Home, to yourself, freedom? I wasn't sure. A nice poem, but some of the repetitions of the word "lost" given that you also used it in the title seemed a little much, especially since this is such a short piece. Nice flow though.

[Damien Dsoul]

Your witty metaphor cuts both ways, your poem's ironical content is so well contains it shimmers with complicit vibe and language. Almost like recalling the gothic story of Hansel and Gretel making their way along the lost, lonely woods as they searched for a means back home ... except you prefer remianing that way. Don't we all.

[George Love]

Nice, very heartfelt and touching emotions. Easy read, great flow and ended very nicely. I like this general feel of this work.

[Crystal]

I know exactly how you feel. I feel that way almost evertime we are together.

[Tania Leigh]

Very sweet poem

"I am lost
But I pray I never find my way"

I love it!

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Must be love, what a wonderful way to be lost. Thank you for sharing. debileah

[Imperfection]

Lovely poem.
Straight from the heart to the heart.
There's a sweet innocence about the way you've expressed yourself.

I loved your repitition of 'I am lost' ...enhances the overall effect of the piece.

[Paula M. Potter]

This one has such a sweet melody to it. Being enveloped by another Just captured no taken prisoner in their arms.