For I have stayed very long in this ecstasy

For I have stayed very long in this ecstasy

A Poem by Jameel Mohamed

I see you hear, yet you are not listening 
I see you watching, for i know you are not observing. 

One day, I'll subtly leave without a farewell. 
For, I have stayed very long in this ecstasy 

Someday you'll look around
And realize something major is missing
I fear you won't even realize
What it is or who it was.

© 2017 Jameel Mohamed


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To be invisible. Bad place to be. You create lonely situation and questions. Thank you Jameel for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Rye
Yep, I know some that should heed this in my life. I liked this very well said.

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Added on December 30, 2017
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Tags: love, romance, breakup, listening, happy, joy, fun, missing, major, realize, farewell, ecstasy

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Jameel Mohamed
Jameel Mohamed

Manipal, India



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