tantalization

tantalization

Your lips are the succulent tantalization
Of the perpendicular climaxation
That I want to taste when I get that fixation
Sometimes it leads to pure unadulterated masturbation
But if I can have your body there will be no frustration
Just pure adulation
The feeling inside you is the greatest sensation
I quiver at your vibration and your body's internal organs that I exploit
To damnation
The tip of my tongue as I roll it so exquisitely- it sparks euphoria's exultation
Our bodies submerge and then reemerge
I bite and purge the inclination
To die this minute . . . and
enter the externalization
with your memory . . . forever, (hauntingly) . . .
I'm gone . . .
Cremation.

Reviews

[Natasha Ashway]

"Cremation" - nice one.

A completely stylishly erotic thought/concept finishing off a very, very HOT poem. Quite clever actually.

Wow! Naughty, naughty, J!

[emz]

Very very good, great use of words, a clever and tantalizing write



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[Reika]

I agree, this was quite the tantalizing piece...
It's hard to explain the feeling I got when reading this, (I read this out loud) but I liked it a lot.
And it really is fun to read it out loud, you know, kind of dramatize it a bit...hehe.

[Legion]

This was indeed a tantalizing piece. Therefore, well titled. Might need to rate it mature though considering some of the lines. I liked it indeed.