Camouflage Capris

Camouflage
Capris clad
Tightly on
The essence of those hips
From which two children sprang,
Spell bounded by the divine-
Nature's miracle excreted from the cosmos,
I wish I never met you.

Reviews

[emz]

LMAO.... Thanks.

This is great... very simple and very very powerful..
Goosebumps adorned my arms!

XX

[Reika]

Niice.
Short, simple, and the last line was just like, BAMM.
Didn't see that coming. Hehe, Awesome.
=)

[Dani California]

Wow, that last line was completely unexpected!
Great poem...
and your last line leaves a certain impact
which changes its entire meaning.
I love when that happens... when we think we
are heading one direction and suddenly find
ourselves in Mayberry somewhere.... lol.

Excellent!

[Freedom]

oooh, i love this. It puts such a vivid image into my head. I absolutely adore how it's so light until the end, when the tone sets in and drops on the reader like an atom bomb. Great twist, there. That's really awesome, i love the simplicity.

[Legion]

Lovely imagery, but not sure about that last line. Why? Good poem though.