Beauty So Magical

Beauty So Magical

A Poem by Edmond Dantes

Beauty So Magical


These words should be accompanied with the scent of a thousand roses,
With a banquet set for royalty,
With harps playing the most beautiful piece of music ever written!
The glimmer in your eyes that could make a ship-
Destined for the most exotic place on Earth, stand still.
With beauty so magical as to make the brightest star in the Heavens
Fall gently upon your lap.






Oct. 8 07

© 2008 Edmond Dantes


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Tis actually a magical read!...if you're calling your beloved at the scenario in the image and knitted this gorgeous piece....she can't resist come over there.....
A beauty described heavenly....loved reading this great short! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


this is an incredible piece..i think for the way you introduce it. "These words should be accompanied with.." that alone is very beautiful. What a classical feel to it, also. This is truly incredible. And that final juxtaposition, of a star falling gently..emphasizes how much you want to give to the intended audience..how much you would do for them. Such a touching piece...the kind that makes you want to call your lover and tell them to come over tonight to lay under the stars.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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