The invatation

It was a dark and stormy night.

When I looked into their eyes,

All I saw was cold, dead, fright...

My fist was shaky,

I knocked lightly hoping no one would hear me.

With the squeak of the door;

And a gasp of the crowd

I suddenly felt that i needed to act proud.

We suddenly stared at the doorman above.

And we all seemed to notice his strange black glove.

"Welcome, welcome, I"m glad your here, certainly you got my invitation, my lovely dear..."

"Come in, come in, the master will not bite surely you must be hungry for it is almost night!"

Author's Note

If you like my poems please give two thumbs up! Also if you saw a typo please feel free to tell me!

Reviews

[Serenity Faith]

I loved it! Short but very eye grabbing. Each line keeps you curious like a good story. Very well written. ^_^

[Weeping Willow]

Great It was great

[Gothic Girl]

really two thumbs up for you! great imagery, rythmn, and descriptions. simple yet great. the tone was also set perfectly frorm the start. :)

[Hisgrace]

Two thumbs up for a great start. Different than other stuff out there but cool.

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Three thumbs up lol. Great imagery :)