House Arrest Final DraftA Story by Jake WalcottThis is my final for the short story class I'm takingAdam had seen that the lights were off from the outside, but was still not entirely prepared to navigate a stranger’s house using only a flashlight. His nerves were peaked, ready to run in case an alarm went off, but his entrance was silent, save the creak of the front door once the lock had been picked. The moon-white, two-story home was surrounded by acres of forest, and there were no neighbors to have their suspicions or cops to shut him down. The walk from his home in a much less affluent town miles away had been long, but would soon be worth it. He reveled in the thrill and guilt of his first robbery; He felt smooth like water drifting between and furniture and fragile vases, until the occasional bump against a chair or creaky doorknob jolted his eyes open and sent sweat down his brow. He kept
his eyes on whatever the flashlight passed over, as if he had a choice, and
looked for the distinctive glitter of jewelry, electronics, or coins. The
pieces that pulled his eyes were harvested into a thick brown bag fashioned
from an old pillowcase, which became more of an obstacle and a burden as it
grew heavier with his newly acquired goods. Adam had
steeled his nerves against the sound of creaky doorknobs, so it took a few
seconds after the front door began to shake for him to realize that he was not
the source of the sound. The hinges
cracked open and Adam crouched to the ground in panic, banging his knee against
linoleum tile. His flashlight illuminated a purple tablecloth surrounding a
rectangular dining table with six seats, one on each end and two on each side.
He ducked underneath the tablecloth and did not have to keep himself silent
because he was frozen with terror. The brown pillowcase crumpled under his grip
against his chest. A switch
was flicked and purple tinted light showed that Adam’s hands were shaking like a
scared puppy. The sound of a heavy set of hard soles entered the house,
followed by the clack of heels and two shuffling sets of feet that were
probably children. The hard
soles dropped loudly across the living room and opened the door of the closet.
Adam prayed the man would not notice the missing fur coat, or the Italian dress
shoes he had taken. Evidently
he did not, because the first thing he said was, “Martha, you’ve got to get rid
of some of these jackets and things.” He paused for a second and added, “They’re
just sitting around wasting space when you wear one and never touch it again.” “Daddy,
I’m still hungry!” “Those
plates were too small! I need more!” The word ‘more’ was dragged out a few seconds
too long and the sharp male voice made Adam cringe. “I think
your mom can whip something up. She’s the best cook around, you know,” said the
man’s deep voice, rough like paint that had been chipping away. The
woman, Martha, sighed and said “I guess I can find something to heat up.” She
sounded exhausted, like the evening she had taken to go out and relax with the
family had only made her more stressed. The
children said thanks and their footsteps dulled as they ran upstairs, while the
couple stayed behind and moved into the kitchen. Cabinets and drawers were
opened and closed, and it dawned on Adam that he would not be able to hide under
the table any longer once the family had assembled for dinner; at least one
pair of legs would knock against him or his sack. “Here,
how about we warm up the leftover turkey from Thanksgiving?” “Or you
could actually cook something instead of being lazy as usual.” “Ralph,
the kids are home…” “They’re
upstairs and we both know they can’t hear a thing. You idiot.” There
was a hard crack of skin on skin. A few seconds of cold silence followed. Martha
crinkled cellophane and grew uncomfortably quiet. “You’re
lucky I’m not wearing the ring. That piece leaves a mark,” he whispered
threateningly. Ralph’s
heavy steps moved out of the kitchen and down the hall. A few moments later he
yelled back, “Where’s my ring?” “It’s
wherever you left it, honey.” “I left
it right here on the table. I always leave it there when I go out.” Adam
recalled a thick band of white gold that had been lying down on a small brown
table with a stripe of black onyx running down the center. At the time, all he
had been thinking about was how much the gold was worth, disregarding what it
represent, or if it represented anything at all. Now the ring rested at the
bottom of his pillowcase. The
microwave started beeping, and Martha called the kids down to eat with urgency
in her voice. There wasn’t much time left before they would have their plates
of leftover turkey and begin sitting down at the table. Adam could smell spiced
meat, a welcome change from the citrus of lemon pledge that the floor reeked
of. “Mom,
Teen Titans is on! I wanna watch the show! It’s the best show ever!” “Yeah,
mom, the best show ever!” “Are you
sure? You’re always watching tv and it’s supposed to be good for families to
sit at the table togeth-“, but the kids had already begun rushing upstairs. “The
kids have the right idea. I’m paying for over 800 channels; we might as well
use ‘em.” He paused for a moment and then added, “and on at least one of those
is a baseball game right now.” He marched up the stairs and left Martha alone,
to scrape whatever was left onto her own place and take up a spot at the head
of the table. Adam was
already uncomfortable, but he could not look away from Martha’s long, white
legs, one across the other, and figured that as far as hiding places go, he
could have done much worse. The smell of her peach perfume mixed with the smell
of the Turkey and could have put him to sleep. He wondered why anyone would treat
a lovely woman so viciously. Although Adam was aware of the irony in a man
robbing a house criticizing another’s morality, he was only there to find
things to pawn off to pay rent and support his roommates. In their two-bedroom,
five-person apartment they fantasized about what it would be like to not be
constantly living on their last dollar. They kept a list on the fridge of all
the unnecessary things they wanted to buy once they had money that was supposed
to motivate them; a skateboard, a blender, Jenga, vanilla vodka, books by Jack
Kerouak, Stanley Kubrick films and a DVD player to watch them on; things normal
people would not give a second thought into buying on an impulse but for them
were always barely out of reach. He had added a toaster and a paint set to the
list, and was now making a mental note to add peach candles and a Thanksgiving
turkey. However, although the list was meant to motivate them it only made them
bitter and resentful that they lacked the opportunities needed to earn their
desires. He did not want to say that
Ralph deserved to be robbed, but the more the thought about it the less guilty
he felt for taking the wedding ring and putting it to his own use. His
introspection was interrupted by the kids running down the stairs yelling for
their mother to help them get the DVD player working. “Mom,
you have to set up the DVD player so we can watch Zombieland! Zombieland is the
best movie ever!” “Yeah,
mom, the best movie ever!” “We
asked Dad to help us, but he was getting sick in his bathroom.” “Daddy
was probably drinking too much. You know he is sometimes. I’ll come see what I
can do.” Adam was
sorry to see her soft skin, which had been a comfort to him under the extreme
stress, disappear from under the table and leave to help the kids. She turned
off the light as she went out, and did not return for the rest of the night.
Adam sat crouched under the table, experiencing a silent night foreign to
someone with four roommates, besides the flickering voices from the children’s
television and a thudding down the stairs to the backyard that sounded like
slow, stomping footsteps. He stayed completely silent until he felt like he
could slide himself across the linoleum and out from underneath the purple
tablecloth without making a sound. The
kitchen was lit only by moonlight, but Adam’s eyes had adjusted to the
darkness. On the kitchen counter he saw the microwave, leftovers of a turkey
dinner, a toaster with uneaten pop-tarts still inside, two discarded mugs of
unfinished coffee, and some eye-drops. His roommates once had eyedrops on the
fridge-list, in case they were ever stoned and needed to look respectable, but removed
them because guests assumed that they wanted to poison someone. He was able to
navigate to the back door without bumping into anything with his shins or his
pillowcase of valuables, a welcome change from his entry. The gentle creak of
the doorknob sounded like nails on a chalkboard to him, but nothing stirred in
the house so he escaped unharmed. Dew had
made the lawn soft like a cushion, and the roof of the house was edged in
silver by the moonlight. Everything seemed quiet and still, which caused even
more of a surprise when in the corner of his eye, Adam noticed something loud
and moving. A
silhouette on the other side of the lawn behind the house was digging into the
lawn with a shovel, and Adam recognized her long, white legs that seemed
helpless earlier, incapable of manual labor. Lying next to the growing pit was
the limp body of a man who must have been at least a foot taller than her. In
normal lighting, in nice clothes, Adam might have compared his hair to melted
milk chocolate, but right now it only matched the growing pile of dirt beside
it. Adam was
almost free, but the gate to his escape creaked slightly, and this time his
fears were justified as Martha turned her head quickly towards him. Her face
was beautiful and was framed by the night stars, but there was nothing arousing
about her look of terror and worry. Her eyebrows were drawn sharp like a
diamond and her eyes were thick bands of white framing her thin black pupils. In any
other situation, Adam would have loved to ask her about her life, talk to her
and get to know her better, but for now the only connection they could have was
an unspoken pact that neither would speak of the other’s actions that night.
She continued to dig as he turned away and fled through the gate. Before
leaving the thick leave-strewn yard and making his way to his home on the
cement, Adam fished into his pillowcase for the ring and turned the warm metal
over in his hands. He felt like Martha had picked it out herself, and realized
how sad he would be when the time came to pawn it off. He felt pangs of
jealously for the next man she married who was a worthy recipient for a similar
prize and pure pity for the poor son-of-a-b***h if he wasn’t. © 2012 Jake Walcott |
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