This was a perfect description of short stories....the piece felt like it described itself with your phrasing...it just floated lazily aroud in my mind and at the end of it all i found like it was a great read...highly descriptive though subtly done...my preferred type of write! :#
This is weird but I felt like I was in the mountains and the ever changing landscapes and changes within seasons.. so much like our lives.. excellent write..xx
This was a perfect description of short stories....the piece felt like it described itself with your phrasing...it just floated lazily aroud in my mind and at the end of it all i found like it was a great read...highly descriptive though subtly done...my preferred type of write! :#
I like the way you used the language. Made the flow of the poem easy to read and got your ideas across. Your words are true. We need words, ideas and story. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote
I'm in college, whoooooo. I like all kinds of rock, and songwriting. That's how I got into Poems in the first place. Some of these will actually be songs of mine I've modified. more..