Human

I will carry you 

To a higher plane

Even if it's nothing

But this darkness

Taken from in to out

A new hunting ground

More powerful prey

Fighting off the Demons

To protect what's left

Of everything human

A sorrow falls

Every time one of us

Is gone from this life

We are fading 

Faster than thought

And we want 

To disappear

But we can't let

The sadness take over

Every time we have a dark day

There are shining lights 

All around us

Remember the people

That are your friends

Old and new

And you will remain 

Human

Reviews

[Vanessa Rico]

Jake! This was amazing and so inspiring! I will definitely advise my friends to read this if they have a bad day...because sometimes we forget that even though we have a bad day or week or period of life, there are people that love us and are there for us! Great write!

[Tasha]

I will carry you
To a higher plane
Even if it's nothing
But this darkness
Taken from in to out

I loved this Jake, you did a really good job it was so amazing and inspiring. You're fantastic.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

"Every time we have a dark day / There are shining lights / All around us." Those were my favorite lines. Maybe it's just me, but I thought that overall, this was just a little bit choppy. Nice work, though.

[Coyote Poetry]

"Every time we have a dark day
There are shining lights
All around us"
Thank you for the positive poem. Life can be hard. We need good friends and family to make us laugh and feel we are needed. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Ravyne Hawke]

beautiful and inspiring... love the first stanza.. great imagery and flow. well done!

[sarah]

really awesome love it

[Rayne Stanton]

Really creative and great. Love it :)

[harley]

wow, jake this writing is absolutely stunning. by the very first line i was hooked. i will b sure to tell all my friends to read this. im sure that everyone will be able to relate to this in one way or another. i love it.

[Lily Mae]

Excellent write.. I love it.. :) x