A Strife That Made Me Whole

I scream with joy that soon all the hate and pain will be a figment of imagination.

Broken pieces embodies the reality I live in

Making the ultimate enemy grin

But jokes on him

God has declared, Us humans will win!

My heart goes out to those who suffer

But please hang in there it will soon buffer

To laughter leading us to greener pastures

So don’t be deceived by false endless disaster.

Life was never meant to be easy

Its filled with ups and down, often making us weary

But the Mighty King has made all humans a treaty

God said, “Regardless if you believe in ME”.

I know not everyone believes in God

But He said, “One person’s faith is Enough”

And I am ready to take this on because God has made me tough!

He has shown me so much unfathomable love

How can I not accept a task from above?

The hell I’ve gone through and will go through 

is not compared to the glory that will breakthrough

the hate of that foe.

So here I stand offering my life

just mimicking The Mighty One who already took the Strife

For me and everyone to live an eternal Life.

I owe my God every bit of me

because He has set me free

from the bondage that tried to devour my soul

That is the kind of love that made me whole! 

Reviews

[sinNsincerity]

This is a really beautiful piece and shows your commitment quite well.
God bless Jane!

[JainieJane]

Thank you (:

[Adam Adams]

very devotional poetry!

liked the sincerity of your heart & remnant innocence of ur soul that's still seemed 2 b so filtered away from unfaithfulness. nice imagery. your metaphoric narration is very captivating here.

[JainieJane]

Thank you Adam!!! I really appreciate your words, you often give me flattering reviews!!!
read moreThank you Adam!!! I really appreciate your words, you often give me flattering reviews!!!

When I write I often disconnect my mind and just let emotions speak my words, sometimes I dont even realize what I write and or even think I'm the one writing it, because the words that leap from my mind isnt normally what I speak when im in tune or alert..

[Adam Adams]

that's a true sign of true writer... and u r true writer. i love how u speak when u let ur emotions speak the words. keep it up, sweetie.

[JainieJane]

[Adam Adams]

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[JainieJane]

oh what it didnt post what I said haha, i just said thank you!

[Karmee]

So here I stand offering my life
just mimicking The Mighty One who already took the Strife
For me and everyone to live an eternal Life.

I loved this part & the ending verse as well.
This is so awesome! Enjoyed

[JainieJane]

Thank you, really appreciate your comment!!!