Loves Ugly Exposure

A description of helpless love going sour.

Love don't always guarantee insurance

Blind sided by false assurance 

Of a future existence 

When consumed by the pleasant 

Intensity of the chemistry

But when jealousy, complexity, 

And zealotry are factored 

Couples often become b******s

Not knowing that their love became substandard 

Headed towards a relationship that's completely devoured 

And leave nothing but cowered 

Hearts that are unable to start over 

Because of the hostile closure

Which began this foreclosure

Loves ugly exposure.

Reviews

[conversations with her ..]

THIS.


no this was sick, i love the flow and meaning behind it all. so glad i found you.

[revalatia]

You write very well.. I was just looking at some of your other work.. Awesome stuff! You have a talent for expressing heavy emotions in your writing while keeping the work simple. I got a lot out of it. Feeling inspired. Thanks for sharing :)

[JainieJane]

Wow thank you, I really appreciate that!!!!!

[Kimberley Hawker]

Love it! I kind of saw my own relationship in some way. Love your style of writing too, look forward to reading more from you.

[JainieJane]

Thank you so much, appreciate your comment!!!

[Adam Adams]

"couples oft. become b******s"... is kinda very intriguing line. liked the depth of your thoughts esp. the way how phenomenally you transmitting reality of love in words. nice work here.

[JainieJane]

thank you! appreciate your comment!

[TaraNicole]

This is really good. I like it a lot. I look forward to more from you.

[JainieJane]

Thank you! really appreciate your comment. I am actually in the process of writing my life story..since I had alot of weird things I've experienced, will be posting my first chapter in a week or two..

[aLittlePain]

Damn that's super tight. I love the pace it's kinda kinda subtle fierce voice. Unapologetic measure of truth. Some really insanely clever lines I dig the consistency of the analogy. Regards Rach

[JainieJane]

wow thank you appreciate your comment, sometimes i just write what i feel not understanding the intensity it gives off.