~.{My life is a Puzzle}.~

People really doesn't know, what's my data; 
My Life is a PUZZLE, 
I'm Mr. Mehta. 

For a while, I'm artist, 
All over spreading my fame. 
For a while, I'm gamer, 
Whose Life is a Game. 
For a while, I'm poet, 
Writing my own Life. 
For a while, I'm actor, 
That's hidden to my wife. 
At a time, I'm friend, 
Whose life is his friends. 
Alas ! they don't know this, 
All are changed with new trends. 
People really don't know, 
Whats my data. 
My Life is a Puzzle, 
I'm Mr. Mehta. 

I know the Truth, thats still unknown. 
I'm a child by heart, No matter how much grown. 
I'm alone & no one is mine, 
Everyone is mean, Its OK. Its Fine ! 
I still remember that time was so great, 
When I was enjoying life with my mates. 
Ravi, Deepak, Shyam,
My childhood homies. 
Rahul, Rushabh, Sharib, Kapil,
My school class roomies. 
Lukman, Pranav, Bhushan, Mihir,
And the list Goes on.... 
I remember them all. 
do they understand my feelings shown ?? 
Ppl really doesn't know whats my data, 
My Life is a Puzzle, 
I'm Mr. Mehta. 

I know, in my life, till I went to grave; 
I have been yelling, & for wat i crave... 
yet didn't got it & will never get. 
ppl know as I do, so I can bet. 
Sometimes I'm roaring, then suddenly a rat. 
Mehta lost in a MAZE & caught in a NET. 
The net of my Feelings & the maze of my Grief. 
Jainam can't explain, more in Brief. 
Ppl really doesn't know whats my data, 
My Life is a Puzzle, 
I'm Mr. Mehta. 

There were times, when ppl took me wrong; 
& I got tired, explaining them long. 
They told I'm mad & they told I'm bad. 
But they failed to figure out dat I was just sad. 
U can Love me or u can hate. 
For no reason I'll accept that its my Fate. 
World is round & so are the people's mind. 
Makes no difference, how much I'm kind. 
Life is such a thing that nobody can rule, 
Doesn't matter, how much we know; 

We're still in a school. 
Ppl really doesn't know whats my data, 
My Life is a Puzzle, 
I'm Mr. Mehta. 

My frndshp, My relation, with u all will never cease. 
I think always freely, 

For that i never take any lease. 
Some say "Mehta" & some call me "Papad". 
I never mind that, as u all r my bud. 
Some say "sleep mode" & some call me "Jaanam". 
I like dat when frnds make such fun. 
My Target, my Goal, my Destination, my Aim, 
All keep changing, still remain the same. 
I'm after friends & my friends are aftr money (?) 
World full of bees & friendship is Honey. 
Ppl really doesn't know whats my data, 
My Life is a Puzzle, 
I'm Mr. Mehta. 

I'm on journey, The journey to search a Truth. 
The Truth that i know, still finding up my route. 
The Truth is such that everybody knows. 
The problem is that nobody follows. 
The Truth of relations is the truth of life, 
Which ppl don't care to cut, holding a knife. 
I do maintain relations, don't know about the rest. 
I'll never lose my friends, till I can do my best. 
I kept diving in my past, there was nothing i found. 
Changes forever gave me lessons & wound. 
People really doesn't know,what's my data. 
My life is a Puzzle. 
I'm Mr. Mehta. 

}»JM   ( Jainam Mehta )

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Reviews

[Talismanic]

Catchy:)p and a cool structure... It's very original. I think 'what's my data' fits just gr8.
'I'm after friends & my friends are after money,' I know this feeling xactly.
Some other lines that stood out to me:
'Sometimes I'm roaring, then suddenly a rat.
Mehta lost in a maze and caught in a net.'
'i'm a child by heart, no matter how grown'
'changes forever gave me lessons and wounds'
We're human beigns and we're complex - we can't communicate entirely who we are but we can pursue the same goal...

[Alicia Beavis]

The opening line doesn't really make sense.
"People really doesn't know" - "doesn't" should be "don't".
"what's my data" - this felt like a weird phrase. It didn't seem to fit with the poem.
"whos life is a game" - "whos" should be "who's" and I'd change this line too "who's life is being played" because "game" gets a little repetitious.
"for a while I'm poet,
singing my own life" - Should "singing" be "writing". Poet's don't sing but write…
"At a time, I'm frnd, 
whos lyf is his frnds." - You have a few typo's in here.
"Alas ! they don't knw dis, 
all r changed with new trends. 
People really doesn't knw, " - same here.

Actually, throughout there are some spelling/grammar/syntax errors.

From what I understood of it, it was interesting and showed you have a lot to say. I really like the last stanza where you say you're on a journey for the truth. It's a journey we're all on.