I Don't Know Why

I Don't Know Why

A Poem by Phoenix

I think of you

how you’re so kind

It makes me cry

It makes me cry

 

I know that now

you’re on my mind

All of the time

All of the time

 

I feel your heart

beat next to mine

It makes me sigh

It makes me sigh

 

Those blue eyes

put tears in mine

I don’t know why

I don’t know why

© 2010 Phoenix


Author's Note

Phoenix
Strangly the inspiration for this hit during a Norah Jones concert. Well maybe that's not so strange...

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I like it. Its simple but complete. Also it has a good rhyme pattern and flow. I also like how the crying from stanza one shows up again in a different way in the last stanza. Most of the time things like that seem redundant but it doesn't in this poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Phoenix

Zushi, Japan



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