There's a Difference.

"What a disaster it would be if you discovered that I cared A little too much for friends but not enough to share." -Motion City Soundtrack

 

Hold me now or later

or never.

I’ll still be shivering

in this cold, cold weather…

Something is missing

I’m searching for it…

So just once more

could you just kiss me?

 

Some things I need to mention…

Such as loving you

Was my only intention.

And I do, it’s true.

But there’s a difference

and sadly I know it

in my experience…

 

So kiss me again

just one more time…

And maybe I’ll find it,

Find it - and then…

Author's Note

Did the rhyming a little differently, so let me know if it worked out.

Reviews

[TheKaylaPup]

the rhyming is odd, but i like it. It seems like there's something there I'm not getting, it makes me want to read it over and over. Good for you. =)

[Alexander Fox]

can't pin point it, but something sticks out here. like one sharp edge on a smooth stone, something is amiss, but it is still beautiful. I shall read it a few more times and findit for you.