What I Miss

Yep, it's a break-up poem.

 

What happened? What happened? Why are you gone??

Please come back and tell me that nothing is wrong!

 

It’s been a short time, but it’s been so long –

It’s strange what I miss, now that you’re gone…

 

Your showered smell and your morning breath,

That cough that sounds like you’ve caught your death,

 

The towel I save for you, that you always use,

The food I make for you, that you always refuse,

 

You always said good morning, and always said good night,

I always fixed your hair, though it never sat quite right,

 

I miss racing you to get to our dates,

We ate burgers, and drank milkshakes,

 

I miss…I miss just holding your hand,

Letting go is what I can’t stand…

 

I miss your kindness, and your weirdness,

And of course I still miss all those kisses.

 

So goodbye my dear, my beau, my friend…

I miss you real bad…but we’ll meet again.

Author's Note

Right or wrong, it's still hard :(

Reviews

[Jess.]

You wrote it very well, and though it's about something sad, it sounds kind of witty, in some parts. I like that.


"It's been a short time, but it's been so long
�It's strange what I miss, now that you're gone�"
I like those lines the most, mostly because I can relate to them.
Good piece of writing!

[deeps]

This is a very well written write here.
Such emotions was poured into your heartfelt write.
Well stated!