>Sarcasm<

The title might ruin it, but oh well. I want it to be clear that it is sarcasm.

Bend me, twist, or break me. I'm your's.

I don't even want myself anymore.

 

Take my heart please, it's sore.

I could bear it, but what for?

I don't even want myself anymore.

 

Give me more pain than I've ever born -

Like a hurt deep down, like a thorn.

And when I fall, leave me on the floor;

I don't even want myself anymore.

 

Light up my soul and hear it roar,

Watch the fire in my eyes, then shut the door.

Smirk and laugh, like you saw a common w***e,

Then end the day by adding up the score.

I don't even want myself anymore.

 

Make me miserable, be a bore,

Dig into my heart, and be a worm.

All I want is to just be your's.

I don't even want myself anymore.

 

Take my heart please, it's torn.

I carry more weight than I've ever worn.

I don't even want myself anymore.

 

Bend me, twist, or break me. I'm your's.

I don't even want myself anymore.

 

 

              

Author's Note

I like to think this shows off my skills in biting sarcasm. But who will it bite? Probably no one. This has to do with the way Ive seen some people look at relationships.... in a cynical, sarcastic, exaggerated way ;)

Reviews

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

Oh my God, that is awesome!!! :D Sarcasm or not, this poem has one of the best flows and rhythm that I've ever read! It's got kind of an emo undertone to it, but keeping sarcasm in mind, that's what gives it its spark!

I definitely know what you mean by your sarcasm... that's just the gift you were given. ;) Amazing job!

Ironically Yours.

[Alexander Fox]

This is so often NOT sarcasm in relationships and some of those lines are exact words i have heard spoken by friends. I love the way you made this flow and you picked such an engaging and biting topic for your directed sarcasm! 10/10