F/R/I/E/N/D/S:

Find me, please, when I hide,

Revive my soul, when it has died.

I'll always love you, I'll always care,

Every time -

No matter what, I'll be there.

Different people, each of you,

See my words, and know they're true:

 

Just a little dark, perhaps (no pun intended)

Although, I'll give her credit, she's not easily offended.

She's always laid back, or so it would seem,

Might want to watch out - she's very keen.

Intuitive and smart, with an even greater heart,

Never loses sight, she knows the right track,

Every time I need her, she's always got my back.

* * *

Anything you say about him, but more than you could dream,

Listens to your words, and knows what they really mean.

Everywhere I looked for him,

X  didn't mark the spot.

And although the sun grew dim,

Never had it burned so hot.

Damned if he does, damned if he doesn't...

Expectations soared and plummeted,

Really tried...though it seemed he wasn't.

* * *

Kindness shines right through her eyes,

Energetic and outgoing (she intimidates the guys).

Loving, warm, and friendly, as ever,

She's got a heart no one could measure.

Empathetic when you need a friend,

Your thoughts will be heard, right through to the end.

* * *

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

This is to my friends, of course :)
I put the names in order of when I met them. I might add someone new someday, but for now these are the people that have meant the most to me in my life! :)

(Thank you Ellen for the grammar help. X is actually what came first, and led to the rest of this poem. Ns and Es and odd numbers were the hardest.)

Reviews

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Hehe your friends are really lucky
You must have worked hard for finding sentences which start with their names' alphabets
My favorite one is the KELSEY one
As for your F R I E N D S (first part) .. It would be better if you edit it to - 'Revive my soul, when it's dead' - makes more sense
Overall it is a cute loving write
I liked it
~Kavish~

[Alexander Fox]

This was freaking awesome, even if i do feel a tad bit used for inspiration. ;-P

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

OMG, that was so awesome! It just sounded so great... and it was a very accurate description of me. ;) yay! :D I must say, though, I think the tribute to Alex was very... uh... let's say "deep"; it seemed as if there was a small storyline hidden in its words as opposed to a description, which I thought was really cool. Kelsey's tribute had the best flow! :) Mine added a nice touch of humor... lol... ;)

You obviously put a lot of effort into it! Great job! I love it! ^^

Ironically Yours.

[Tallulah]

This is awesome. You write this so well. Not many people can write this type of poem but you did amazingingly. Good job, You were very creative with the us of each letter.

[Ellen Hammond]

This is a very beautiful poem honoring your friends. Just a thought, but the second line is a bit off.

"Revive my soul, when it's died."

To keep your lovely rhyming scheme, and still be grammatically correct you could simply change the "when it's died" to "when it has died".

You did very well writing lines for each letter of their names....I probably would have taken a lot long to think of something for the "X" I like it!