P/H/O/E/N/I/X

P/H/O/E/N/I/X

A Poem by Phoenix
"

A few words to describe the Phoenix

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Please place that
Hand and hold
On to only
Enduring envisions,
Not the night that never
Imagines that impossible
Xenon

© 2008 Phoenix


Author's Note

Phoenix
I realize xenon is an element, but it's colorless and odorless and found in traces in the atmosphere, so it seemed to suit. And there are not many words that start with X, so if anyone thinks of a better one let me know.

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Classy. Clever. And xenon fits your poetry well.....present but not really. Like fleeting emotions that you know only as long as you arn't trying to know them. Keep up the great work and i hope your enjoyin comicon!!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lol Smart. ^^ I like how everything fits as a sentence. Awesome job! It's very... mystical. :)

Eternally Yours, Blade and Blood (aka Jasmine)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very clever, I like it. Nice piece.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Phoenix
Phoenix

Zushi, Japan



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