Across Razors for You

Across Razors for You

A Story by Phoenix
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Pretty random and short, and kind of cute...if it makes any sense.

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        “I’d walk across razors for you.”
        “Razors? What are you saying, Stan? You sound crazy.”
        “No seriously, I would.”
        “Now you’re just joking.”
        “No I’m not.”
        “Let’s just be realistic a second, let’s be serious-”
        “I told you, I am.”
        “Alright…so you’d walk across razors…”
        “For you.”
        “For me. I guess that’s nice of you, thanks for letting me know. The next time someone has to walk on razors-”
        “Sophie, that’s not what I meant! You know what I mean, right?”
        “ I guess – let go of me! – you just have a funny way of showing it…saying it.”
        “I’ve got a surprise for you.”
        “What is it…”
        “Chocolate.”
        “Stan, it’s half eaten.”
        “It’ll still taste good.”
        “…”
        “Well, you want it?”
        “Sure, okay…”
        “...So, is it good?”
        “It’s pretty good.”
        “So…what do you say? Will you?”
        “Alright.”
        “Yes! Was it the chocolate?”
        “The razors.”

© 2008 Phoenix


Author's Note

Phoenix
I wrote this just randomly and didn't really mean for it to be anything. It ended up being pure dialogue so I'm wondering if it makes sense.

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Mmmm.... Chocolate! lol "Walk across razors". Sounds romantic to a point; sounds stalker"ish" if you think about, but, you're right, it is a cute lil' dialogues. Kind of a funny too! ^^ Nice write!

Eternally Yours, Blade and Blood (aka your friend, Jasmine)*

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Added on February 28, 2008

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