“ATTAINING SUNSET”

Happiness lies in satisfaction.🖌

Just like the climate I’m moody,
Sometimes cloudy or can be sunny.
Sometimes autumn may be springy,
Winter days too but change to rainy.
All the training still I’m waiting,
To see the view of mystery shining.

Saw all preachers,
Praising the mortal’s humanity.
Hoping for best,
Down for the great divinity.
Hardworking soul,
So get it’s position security.

The Mean world,
Of multi-masked.
One dies,
And others laugh.
Conspiracy everywhere,
Even the newborn is in there.

What was the dream,
But dreamt all life.
What it’s for,
But simply content.
Living in the moment,
Route’s beauty to enjoy.

Chosen path and consequences,
Profits for hospitals.
Provoking enthusiasm,
Write your own story.
Sunrise is beauty,
But sunset is the peace.

Author's Note

Not everyone gets what they dream for even if they work harder for it . It’s not cause you are not capable but it’s god’s plan to place you at a more suitable spot. So be positive and be satisfied with your life. Hope everyone is doing fine.

Reviews

[AYVID N]

I often feel I wasn't born in a priviledged enough place but then I was also given great things that I really don't deserve. So I'm trying to be happy with my lot. Counting one's blessings isn't always easy but it must be done to view our life with the right perspective. From this poem, I see that I'm not alone in my thinking about these things.

[JENNY]

That’s so true Divya. I’m greatful for your valuable thoughts. Have a nice day

[Arundass TP]

Beautiful poem. Enjoyed reading

[JENNY]

Thank you taking time read my work.
Great to know you liked it . Have great days ahead.

[Ken Simm.]

I so associate with the fulsome thoughts in this fine, well constructed poem.
I agree with your notes as well to a point. But then I am an ex teacher.

[JENNY]

Thanks Sir for your valuable review. Your thoughts are always welcomed.