Sweet Malediction

Love > Hate

You never respected her,
May everyone respects you.
You were never there in her lows,
May you have everyone in your highs.
Even her soulmate gave her pain,
May you only experience joy.
You are the worst,
May worst never happens to you.
But it’s just that,
You miss her every second of your life.
You be immortal out of sweet malediction ,
There you know the worth of the lost gem(Her) .

Author's Note

It’s my first pessimistic poem. As I was not able to stop myself watching the incident that happened.
#Never disrespect anyone guys cause after some time your guilt will eat you up .Good day.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Sometimes we don’t know what we have till it’s gone. I felt a sort of familiarity breeds contempt here. I don’t know the circumstances, but I can feel the emotion. Writing about negativity can be the first steps to healing my friend. You penned this beautifully Jenny.

Chris

[JENNY]

Thanks Chris for your lovely words.I really appreciate your review. Keep smiling.

[AYVID N]

A very sad poem JENNY. Yes, guilt catches up and kills the soul. The hardest to forgive is the own self. Your words are so touching.

[JENNY]

Thanks for your valuable review Divya.And your words are so true it’s really difficult or we can say next to impossible.

[AYVID N]

You are most welcome JENNY.

[Ken Simm.]

I agree with your note totally and I find your touching poem excellent. Hate is always a failure.

[JENNY]

That’s so true love always defeats hate .Thanks for your remarkable review.

[willweb]

And when you know that loss, you know it forever I believe. The heart has a memory so very long and it will continually break when that one special person is lost. Beautifully done.

[JENNY]

Thanks Will for your thoughtful review.