TO SOMEONE

Times when we have capability but lacks opportunity.

How interesting is the fact of life,
Just watching people living there lives.
Where a life standing in this crowd,
More than usual sitting on ground.

Allowing bird to fly high in sky,
Tying the claws with a string by.
Losing hope one day the bird will die,
Writing the history how humanity died.

Examining the world a life found,
Deep somewhere is a wound .
Never letting it sleep day or night,
It’s not just a dream but it might.

Pretty happy someone resemble its life,
But then pity on that beautiful kite’s life.
Nowadays negativity embracing it well,
Devoid of thoughts it can’t escape as well.

To Someone who feels the same,
You better know time flies quite fast well.
It’s just the beginning when it’s hard,
Coz ending is experienced happy so far.

Author's Note

I hope you’ll enjoy my work

Reviews

[Mk.t.g]

"Allowing bird to fly high in sky,
Tying the claws with a string by.
Losing hope one day the bird will die,
Writing the history how humanity died."
Such wonderful and painful lines! This is honestly such a good write, with a brilliant selection of words! Thanks for sharing, Jenny!
Mk.t.g

[JENNY]

I really appreciate your review.Thank you Mk.t.g

[Mk.t.g]

You're Welcome, Jenny!

[Chris Shaw]

Beautifully expressed poetry Jenny. Touching to this reader. As long as the bird flies there is hope. Never give up too early, I take from this poem. Thank you for sharing.

Chris

[JENNY]

Thank Chris for your precious review. We should always look forward to the amazing surprises of life sometimes it may be troubling but we should believe in happy ending.
May you have a wonderful and prosperous future.

[willweb]

Nicely done, I have been in situations like this but find if you are patient, opportunities will show themselves. Thank you for sharing.

[JENNY]

Yep never lose hope. Thanks Will I really appreciate your review.