I’m in you

I’m in you

A Poem by JENNY
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The feeling you have when miss your bff who is far away from you and you want tell him/her not to miss you because you both are single soul in different bodies…….

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Look at yourself,
I’m in your style .
Look at yourself,
I’m in your smile.
Don’t miss me,
I’m in you.

Look at the mirror,
I’m in your eyes.
Look at your watch,
I’m in that time.
Don’t miss me,
I’m in you.

You need not to wait for me ,
I’m your time.
Just focus on the journey,
I’m your ride.
Don’t miss me,
I’m in you.

Look around yourself,
I’m everywhere.
Look towards the sky,
I’m anywhere there.
Don’t miss me,
I’m in you.

Look your beautiful heart,
I’m your soul.
Pay attention to your present,
Cheering for you I’m in your future.
Don’t miss me,
I’m in you.

© 2022 JENNY


Author's Note

JENNY
Ignore grammar problems and please show your love towards my hard work 💜

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seriously sad in a most beautiful way .. I am glad I found these words today .. Neville

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JENNY

1 Year Ago

Thanks for your valuable review my dear friend. Wishing you beautiful life ahead .
Neville

1 Year Ago


and back at you too JENNY :)
I like the poem. It has a good flow to it. Well written! You can really feel the emotion behind your words.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JENNY

1 Year Ago

Thanks for your valuable remark my friend.
Ah, this is a beautiful poem. Encouraging, heartfelt and poetic. "Look at your watch, I'm in that time." Tyfs enjoyed this read.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JENNY

1 Year Ago

Thank you my friend for your enthusiastic review. I’m glad that you liked it . Have a great day
Such a sad ,introspective and beautifully constructed piece. The flow is exceptonal.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JENNY

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much Ken Simm. for precious words . I really appreciate you for stopping by to review.
A beautiful, inward looking poem. Yes, we all must have that inner faith and confidence in ourselves. We are never alone if we still have our own soul for company. I appreciate your words so much JENNY. Very well written.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JENNY

1 Year Ago

It’s a new dimension of thought I could think of. Thanks my friend for your innovative review.
AYVID N

1 Year Ago

You are welcome dear Jenny.
I share this feeling so wonderfully expressed in a manner that I had not heard before. Nicely done

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JENNY

1 Year Ago

Thanks Soren for your precious review
Separation from someone close to you can be difficult, but as you kindly say, don't feel too sad because you're always in my heart. Beautiful words from a loving heart. Well done Jenny.

Pauline.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JENNY

2 Years Ago

Thanks Pauline for appreciating.I’m glad to read your review.
Pauline

2 Years Ago

You're welcome.
I love everything about this. The concept and theme are perfect and something I wish I had thought of. Really nice

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JENNY

2 Years Ago

Thanks Willweb . I grateful to your words.
Wonderfully composed, Jenny! Loved this.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JENNY

2 Years Ago

Thanks Mk.t.g for stopping by to give this wonderful review .
May you have beautiful days ahe.. read more
Mk.t.g

2 Years Ago

You're Welcome, Jenny! You deserve this, as you are a wonderful writer.
Separation from loved ones is difficult. Living so far apart can bring on sad feelings. The writer here is trying to soften that sadness by saying to her loved ones, don't miss her because you carry her inside your heart. Thank you for sharing Jenny.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


JENNY

2 Years Ago

Thank you Chris for giving your precious time to understand the feeling I wanna convey . Hope you ha.. read more
Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thank you Jenny and I wish you well also :)

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