My Unspoken Love

Pretty straight forward

My unspoken love
Full of fear
My unspoken love
Draws near

Does she know her beauty?
Oh, what it can do
Take my breath away
Keep my voice too quiet to hear

Lost in the hypnotic glow of her eyes
I lose my sense of surroundings 
Forever here I could stay
Alone
Just you and I

I want to talk
But the silence is too glorious
I want you to know
What exactly you do to me

Not wanting a missed chance
Nor a wrecked dance 
I can't bring myself to do it
Maybe tomorrow will be my day

My unspoken love
Full of doubt
My unspoken love
Forever silent

Reviews

[trainwreck]

This was pretty cool. :) Good job with the pattern. This piece flowed nicely.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Oh this was lovely. I loved the longing and awe of this person you expressed. Very sweet, passionate, and relatable. Wonderful job:)
God bless

[Jack...]

Nice, the longing and desrie are evident in this piece.

[s y e]

Wow, the emotion in this is great. His feelings are clear for us too see! Well done!

[Stan]

Good poem. His feelings are clear and creates real empathy in the reader

[Jagger Cyde]

Thank you. My biggest goal is always to fill whoever is reading with an intended emotion.

[Annabelle Lee]

AWWWWW. how sweet!

[Be myself!]

Amazing. So this is why guys are silent when I hug them. lol