(not finished) Ugly.

No plastic surgery.

No cosmetics of any kind,

Have what it takes to make my face fine.

When I stare at my reflection,

I don’t see beauty

All I see is beast within me.

My voice is all scratchy,

Not fair on poor ears,

You’d wish for my voice box to just disappear.

Author's Note

Hey guys, this is what I've been working on today...What do you think so far?? Should I continue??

Reviews

[Dayran]

Aaaaaaaw!! You're too hard on yourself. Have a chocolate cake.

[olla]

yep..

This is really good!

[Lumière Dé..]

keep going :) it's interesting and I can definitly relate

[eglantine]

GLad to see that you're jotting down nand sharing, even though you realize it's not finished. Def have a start here--keep going :)

[Sleeping Maiden]

yesh, continue please!! I liked this. It flows really well. I love the theme too.
Nicely done.. keep writing!

[Balance]

Very nice piece. I like how you put things out our mind.

"I don’t see beauty
All I see is beast within me."

so what do you visually see when you look at your reflection? I think you should try and describe how the inside mix with the outside...Keep on the good job! Im waiting for the final version :)

[AK]

Nice poem! I really liked what you are getting at...keep writing!